Monday, 18 March 2013

The Horrible WW1

The petrified noises
The warm blood
The sad death

The loud bombs
The horrible gas
The cold face

The hard breath
The rotten foot
The helpless people

The unwanted people
The guilty team
The helpless crying

The tricked men
The brave guns
The homesick men

The sad general
The horrible guns firing
The hard beating

The loud screams
The lost friends
The horrible darkness.

By Biflu Miah Year 8

The Woeful First World War

The loud awakening

The angry general

The petrified team

The determined enemy

The contagious mustard-gas

The blinded men

The rapid bullets

The dead regiments

The glowing moon

The insipid food

The slimy mud

The moaning injured

The tired knocked-out

The sounding whistle

The dying men.

By Theo Pitter Year 8


The Wounded War



The scattered men
The depressed noises
The guilty general
The confused crying
The rotten bodies
The brave soldiers
The misinformed humans
The bloody war
The helpless bodies
The desperate men
The fearful bombing
The full trenches
The lonely women
The terrified children
the confused wives
The shocked men
The happiness dying
The debating country
The intoxicating gas

By Cleo Reddington Year 8

The Unknown Ending

The excited soldiers
The shouting women
The loud bombs
The small trenches
The muddy trenches
The trench foot
The dying men
The small hole
The shell-shock experience
The no-mans land
The terrible place
The unknown trickery
The dying friend
The noisy bombs
The missing leg
The mustard gas
The blind men
The brave soldiers
The screaming men
The unknown return
The shooting guns
The bleeding men
The crying men
The dying souls
The long war
The happy mum
The happy women
The happy country

By Sakerie Year 8

The War

The happy march
the teary trenches
The scattering rats
The long stand
The petrified poison
The betrayed family
The brave solider
The sad death
The silent cry
The emotional heart
The rotten food
The lovely pudding
The tricked army
the mean leader
The disgusting diseases
The tiring team
The toxic mustard-gas
The soggy trench-foot
The rotten lice
The jumpy insects
The proud family
The fearful hero
The mean choice
The crowded trench
The frightening bombing
The cold weather
The thundery day
The rainy mud
The floody trench
The ill solider
The poor family

By Thasniya Parvin 8n

The Tricked Soldiers

The excited laughs
The puzzled mind
The betrayed men
The painful trench-foot
The horrific bombs
The crackling neck
The rotten smell
The hard work
The brave men
The mustard gas
The burning neck
The guilty men
The loud bombs
The stinking toilets
The blooded bodies
The loud shot
The dripping blood
The shouting soldiers
The lost mind
The guilty soldiers
The wanted men
The angry soldiers
The puzzled mind
The cold knee
The droopy eyes
The fast breathing
The blinking eyes
The stopping blood.

By Adrees Chohan 8N

The Shocking War

The exciting trip.
The happy journey.
The shocking start.
The annoying noise.
The dirty trenches.
The scattered people.
The screaming whistle.
The signal go.
The brave soldiers.
The sticky mud.
The loud guns.
The stinging mustard-gas.
The helpful mask.
The helpless people.
The warm blood.
The crying family.
The tears falling.
The dreadful death.
The guilty shot.
The shocking death.
The helpless heart.
The shaking body.
The lost soul.

By Seonaid Rowley Lawrence 8n