The phone goes dead

In this story I mostly enjoyed the ending were he phoned the Zodiac 555. It was clever what he did and made me want to read more of his stories.

I would recommend this mostly to teenagers because some younger people might not understand the ending and might think that is alive when he is not. Anyone that phones the zodiac 555 is dead and is trying to pass on a note, then he wrote David said "hello" which means he is dead!

That's what I like about this this story.