Tuesday, 14 May 2013
Twitter Fiction
Year 8 pupils wrote a piece of 'twitter fiction' all based around the image above. The creative and imaginative ideas are superb! Please take the time to read through them!
The end
I didn't know where I was going. Where I was going to land. Had no clue what's going to happen next. I thought it was the end.
Altima Rahman Year 8
Altima Rahman Year 8
Chasing
Running through the dark and misty woods as something chased after her who could it be exactly? How did this all happen? What has the world come to? Am I dead?
Kenia Hazell Year 8
Kenia Hazell Year 8
Skeleton
She found a skeleton. Pitch black in the room. Axe on top of the detectives head; quick as a flash she drops dead. A mask is left on the floor with a voice recorder saying, "boo!"
By Hawo Ali Year 8
By Hawo Ali Year 8
Goosebumps
She was wanted nowhere; ready to exit life and wander in paradise. Goosebumps corrupted her, eyes blurred, nose blocked. She jumped.
By Aysha Choudhury Year 8
By Aysha Choudhury Year 8
Descending
I was descending slowly to the ground. The sun was scorching my back. A huge shadow formed covering almost everything around me and it was making the loudest engine sound I had ever heard.
By Amin Hajisaid Year 8
By Amin Hajisaid Year 8
Paradise
She dropped off the cliff, thinking about paradise. She could feel goosebumps covering her skin. She could feel the air prickling at her arms. What would she do when she reached the end?
By Isma Bibi Year 8
By Isma Bibi Year 8
Jump
I jump out. The gushing wind slaps my face as I fall. She was there too, there were no strings. I reach out. LATE!
By Naeema Islam Year 8
By Naeema Islam Year 8
Jump
I had to jump. My heart obviously beating, the look down didn't help either. I shouted "Jeff." He plummeted to the ground.
By Lavell Rhule Year 8
By Lavell Rhule Year 8
Snapped
He looked at her with a smile. Her eyes met with his, then she looked away. Suddenly he cord snapped.
By Sadia Bibi Year 8
By Sadia Bibi Year 8
Gazing
Their eyes gazed into each other, until he looked away, realising what he'd just done.
By Sarah Waite Year 8
By Sarah Waite Year 8
Darting
I was darting down. Trying to catch up with her. I felt the strings on my parachute about to split. I had to grab onto something. It was too late.
By Shakil Ahmed Year 8
By Shakil Ahmed Year 8
Gliding
We were gliding down, the wind gushed. My strings attached to me got tangled and you were gone.
By Zaynah Begum Year 8
By Zaynah Begum Year 8
Screams
The girls jumped. Screams flew out of their mouths. The rip grew. A screech. The girls no longer smiled. Neck snapped; tangled body...death!
By Kenda Davis Waite Year 8
By Kenda Davis Waite Year 8
Amazing
There are 5 of us, trying out something amazing. Two of them disappeared. I have a camera, but no footage.
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
Flying
Birds are flying, the breeze on my face, this is what paradise feels like? A bird had torn it; what shall I do?
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
Bumper cars
The wind changed, they both collapsed, crashing as if they were bumper cars, they are falling, tangled up in string, altitude of 500m; land. Die?
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
By Cyrus Bennett Williams Year 8
Smile
As you flew on by the wind blew through your hair, first glance, that smile. You were lost forever. Gone.
By Faizah Nasar Year 8
By Faizah Nasar Year 8
Relief
He walked up the stairs and opened the door. The lights were off, he turned them on and there was a head on the chair..."what a relief!"
By Towhid Alom Year 8
By Towhid Alom Year 8
Gliding
We were gliding through the air we pulled our parachutes. Suddenly a plane had come out of the clouds. The wind changed and pushed us towards the plane.
By Sadiq Khan Year 8
By Sadiq Khan Year 8
No string
We jumped out of the helicopter, I could feel the air brush through my face. "Where's your string?" My face hit the floor.
By Mahfoozur Rahman Year 8
By Mahfoozur Rahman Year 8
Danger
Here it was around us; a deadly sight. Dangerous sounds deafen our ears. Slow fresh breeze stood still in the terror.
By Sabine Ngono Atangam Year 8
By Sabine Ngono Atangam Year 8
Plunge
I watched her plunge unexpectedly to the ground. A smile plastered on my face. Movement beneath me. Was it suicide?
By Kimberley Newsome Year 8
By Kimberley Newsome Year 8
Bang
We fell; the wind blew in our faces. Would I live? I didn't know! We hit the floor with a loud bang.
By Hanan Hassan Ali Year 8
By Hanan Hassan Ali Year 8
Ended
I opened the door, looked down, took a step and fell; there was a crack. Then it ended forever.
By Farhana Ali Year 8
By Farhana Ali Year 8
Jump
The man jumped out of the plane. He put on his parachute and down he went. "Splash!" Said the water.
By Musa Dahir Year 8
By Musa Dahir Year 8
Blame
He was only a child, why did he follow his Daddy. Unprepared to jump off. I blame him!
By Sarah Mullgrave Year 8
By Sarah Mullgrave Year 8
Gone
Death; 5m away from death itself. The feeling of floating numbs the fear, we land. Alive. We're lost. Gone.
By Nia Clarke Year 8
By Nia Clarke Year 8
Sky Diver
Somehow I fell. My parachute ripping. I could see my friend; next minute gone. I was a sky diver with no equipment. All colour fading away.
By Sayeed Anwar Year 8
By Sayeed Anwar Year 8
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